User:SonnyBarnes1010/Choose an Article

Article Selection
Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.

Option 1

 * Timeline of music in the United States (1970–present)
 * Article Evaluation
 * I would say the content of the article is relevant to the information with it describing the major events that happened in each up to the present. The article is very neutral with it just stating each event in a sentence and not giving much context to the event. Most of the claims have a citation, but some are red and don't have an article on wikipedia about them. I would say the citations are good enough, with the citation and end part of the wikipedia is almost as long as the actual paper. I would say that it somewhat covers the content gap, with it having information on black culture, but doesn't have a link to Latin American reward shows and also didn't have information a couple of music in America that came from Asians. Looking at the talk pages, they talked about working on the citations, which makes sense because there was ton of them.
 * Sources
 * 14th Army Brand link was missing an article this source could help: https://keep.lib.asu.edu/items/153894
 * Anthony Seeger was missing an article link, this could help: https://www.international.ucla.edu/lai/person/500
 * Anthony Seeger was missing an article link, this could help: https://www.international.ucla.edu/lai/person/500

Option 2

 * Article title
 * Smihula waves
 * Article Evaluation
 * The content of the article is relevant to the information for the topic with the begging part describing what Smihula waves are and breaks down the various aspects behind the symbolism of the wave. It then has a chart that is suppose to show how this wave has worked throughout time and how the waves are more frequent now. I would say the article would be slightly biased behind saying that it is true, but it does have a section that talks about the controversy behind it. The citations are reliable with it only missing two that it needs. It does not address the content gap with it not diving in topics that have been underutilized in the past. All the talk page says is that it qualifies as a article in the Wikiproject History and economics.
 * The content of the article is relevant to the information for the topic with the begging part describing what Smihula waves are and breaks down the various aspects behind the symbolism of the wave. It then has a chart that is suppose to show how this wave has worked throughout time and how the waves are more frequent now. I would say the article would be slightly biased behind saying that it is true, but it does have a section that talks about the controversy behind it. The citations are reliable with it only missing two that it needs. It does not address the content gap with it not diving in topics that have been underutilized in the past. All the talk page says is that it qualifies as a article in the Wikiproject History and economics.


 * Sources
 * They didn't have an article about Daniel Smilhula and this source could help write an article https://en-academic.com/dic.nsf/enwiki/10586570
 * For the long-term economic waves I would use this source for it Kondratiev wave

Option 3

 * Article title
 * Tibetan Mastiff
 * Article Evaluation
 * I think the content of this article is very relevant to the topic with it having a lot of information on Tibetan Mastiffs. They break it down in various groups to make the flow of information better. There's not for the article to biased for, because it is really not making an argument. There are two paragraphs that Wikipedia wanted more citations in, so you could say that it's not up to par. The ones they did have were good enough however. This article wouldn't cover an equity gap.  In the talk section there was debate between what was  a true Tibetan Mastiff was and they both has sources to back up their claims.
 * Sources
 * They need the sources to be checked and for new ones to be added in.
 * Canine inherited demyelinative neuropathy: https://pubmed.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/6259873/
 * asymptomatic hypothyroidism: https://www.endocrineweb.com/conditions/subclinical-hypothyroidism
 * Canine inherited demyelinative neuropathy: https://pubmed.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/6259873/
 * asymptomatic hypothyroidism: https://www.endocrineweb.com/conditions/subclinical-hypothyroidism