User:SonnyBarnes1010/Social media and psychology/JB3R2BOO Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

SonnyBarnes1010 - Social Media and Psychology


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:SonnyBarnes1010/Social_media_and_psychology?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Social media and psychology

Evaluate the drafted changes
The first citation adds support to the information in the article. This is good additional information. Another idea would be to link the technical terms to pages in wikipedia that contain definitions. This might help the reader better understand the content. For example, a link to "introvert" and "extrovert" would help clarify the meaning of the traits.

Also, I'm not clear of the intent of the citation in the following sentence: "Social media also provides us with a constant supply of rewards that keeps us coming back for more. Whenever we receive a like or a new follower, it activates the brain's social reward system which includes the ventromedial prefrontal cortex, ventral striatum [2], and ventral tegmental area." It seems the added citation is to define the term "ventral striatum", but the article is a bit long including other information. A link the the word in wikipedia might work better here.

[2] "Ventral Striatum - an overview | ScienceDirect Topics". www.sciencedirect.com. Retrieved 2022-04-11.

However, the link for "ventral tegmental" to a wikipedia page for definition purposes is really good. Although, I'm not sure the link for "ventromedial prefrontal cortex" is helpful since the page has not been created. This could be helpful to initiate the creation of the page.

The third citation is a good supporting article which enhances the page.

One recommendation would be to make the changes in smaller chunks rather that over the whole article. The changes were a bit confusing to follow and hard to locate.