User:SonnyBarnes1010/Social media and psychology/Jonesks4 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

SonnyBarnes1010


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:SonnyBarnes1010/Social_media_and_psychology?preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Social media and psychology

Evaluate the drafted changes
I am unsure as to whether you made any changes to the article or not as the article and your article draft look very similar. In regards to the lead in your article draft, it really only mentions the concept of social media and various social media sites that were created, but doesn't really mention anything that has to do with the article body which talks about various other things not included in the lead of the article. I would suggest making changes to the lead to make sure that it flows with the article body information. I do see that you added some citations in the article body that aren't in the original article, which was a great job. As far as the article body in your draft goes, I see that some of the content in the article body tends to overshadow some of the other content in the article body, where there is way more information included in some of the subheadings than others, I would try and improve that as well. I think that the citations you added to the article does improve the article somewhat, but not completely.