User:SonnyBarnes1010/Social media and psychology/Lowy26 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

SonnyBarnes1010


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:SonnyBarnes1010/Social_media_and_psychology?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
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Evaluate the drafted changes
Your topic is good but I have a reccomendation that you can introduce some updating social media and introduce their effect on psychology.

Overall, the structure is clear, you list several different aspects of your topic and described them detailedly.

For the Lead part, you pay attention to social media but not connect it with the psychology. I think you could include some brief contents and introduction about their connection in the lead part, so that readers could know what you are introducing at the fist look.

The sources you listed are a little bit out of date. You could find some newer source about the topic.