User:SonnyBarnes1010/Social media and psychology/Parkerorr2 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username) SonnyBarnes1010


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:SonnyBarnes1010/Social_media_and_psychology?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Social media and psychology

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I like what you have added to this article. You properly cite your sources and I can jump from the reference page to the place they are at in the article with the click of one button. I also believe that the sentences you have added to the article add more description and detail to each body paragraph to give it more context and information. I do not believe you removed any sentences from article. These additions provide the reader with more knowledge. All of your citation links work although I do get confused on the "jump to" links for #7, 11, 13, 39, I am not sure why there are no actual citations there. Some of the capitalization and spelling needs checked in what you had added to the article. Overall, good job on your article and the additions you have made.