User:SonyaBIOL497/Lorena Alarcon-Casas Wright/Sarahsgoh Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

SonyaBIOL297


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:SonyaBIOL497/Lorena_Alarcon-Casas_Wright?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead: I liked how concise and informative this lead was. It gave me a good overview of Dr. Wright and showed me her successes and accomplishments in a organized way. The only critique I would have is to maybe switch the first sentence around a bit to make it flow a bit better. Maybe to this: "Lorena Alarcon Casas Wright (MD, FACE) is a physician-endocrinologist and an Associate Professor at the University of Washington School of Medicine who serves as the Clinical Director of the LatinX Diabetes Clinic at UW Medicine’s Diabetes Institute."

Content, Organization: I liked each section and how there was a specific advocacy section and an expansion on her diabetes clinic. One thing I'm not really sure on, are we supposed to address her as Dr. Wright or just Wright in the content. In addition, I really liked reading about her personal life and I wonder if there are more articles out there talking about this? I totally understand if there's not but I would love to learn more about her personal life.

Sources, Tone/Balance: Your sources and tone seem great to me!

Media, infoboxes and overall impressions: Having a picture of Dr. Wright would be a great addition! For your infobox, I think adding a "known for" would be interesting information for the reader. My overall impressions are all great! I really enjoyed reading this wikipedia article, it was very informative and I love reading about Dr. Wright's accomplishments.