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Les Bursill I really enjoyed this article because it surprised me. It showed that a person can be involved in so many different things at once and be successful everywhere. This article does seem a bit outdated because it doesn't mention anything that he has done past 2013. It mentions that he had to leave some post because of illness so does that mean he died? It never says anything about that. The article seems to have a neutral tone. There could use more citations throughout the article. It is very detailed and it seems like the person who wrote it either knew him or interviewed him for this. Because it doesn't have many citations but it includes a lot of details that cannot be inferred from his work. There are only 8 citations throughout the whole article.