User:Sophi.cheng/Snake/SydneyPeskovitz Peer Review

The first paragraph in the sandbox appears to be a rewording of what is already written, although I am unclear of the reason for that.

The second paragraph is more interesting, with the context of snakes as delicacies in some countries. I thought this was a good addition to the consumption paragraph. However, stating it is important to restrict snake hunting appears biased. Instead, state the negative affects over-hunting snakes has on the ecosystem.

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