User:Sophia244/User:Hcb8513/sandbox/Sophia244 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?
 * Hcb8513


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Sophia244/User%3AHcb8513%2Fsandbox/Sophia244_Peer_Review?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_peer_review
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * NA
 * NA

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)


 * 1) The event posted is closely relevant to the list of death that the author is investigating.
 * 2) The narration has a neutral tone and does not have personal opinion on the event.
 * 3) Adding a bibliography section may be helpful for readers to refer to the original sources.