User:Sophia MacDonald/Qusayr 'Amra/Ekidd04 Peer Review

General info
Sophia MacDonald
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Sophia%20MacDonald/Qusayr_%27Amra?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Qusayr 'Amra

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Hello Sophia,

Overall I think what you've added is fine, I think it would help if you add what your adding directly to the sections, just so it's easier to see what's being added where, just so it's easier to truly tell if its beneficial information. It'll also be beneficial to you to see if there is access information that needs to be removed or reworded. Overall I think you have a solid structure, my biggest advice would be to check the sections that have [citation needed]. Good luck writing!

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