User:Sophiabaylis/Feminist movement/Armagadda Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

( Sophiabaylis, Ashlie.k.hood, Cahae17, Clmercer9)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Sophiabaylis/Feminist_movement?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Sophiabaylis/Feminist_movement?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Sophiabaylis/Feminist_movement?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think a good change would be to add more topics or main themes to talk about. I feel like you have a lot of depth with what you say about Feminism in history, social media, and politics. I suggest maybe adding feminism in culture could be interesting to add to the draft. You could bring up how does our culture treat or regard feminism. Maybe adding specifically from the 90s to now regards the movement.

I believe adding indents and spacing to your paragraphs would also be very beneficial. It just feels like three big blocks of information without much organization. I think you could organize the information and segment it further. One Idea I would suggest is separating each wave of feminism.

I think the tone of your article also seems very neutral so it should be good on that front!

I believe adding some images that illustrate feminism would be really beneficial as well!