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Article Evaluation
I reviewed Professor Gillmor's Wikipedia Article.

The linked adjective "American" immediately distracted me. This seemed to be a self-explanatory adjective that didn't need to be linked, but I may have that perspective due to my bias as an American.

I noticed that his role as a Professor isn't mentioned underneath the "Career" section and I found this peculiar. His occupation that is shown beneath his photo only lists Director of Center for Citizen Media. I think the occupation should include his role as a Professor at Arizona State University since he is currently teaching a course I am enrolled in with this school.

The article provides a brief description of his book, We the Media but does not provide a brief description for his other book, Mediactive. It appears there is not a Wikipedia page for his Mediactive either. There is also a mention that one of Dan's quotes is "widely cited" but the article no source that provides evidence of this quote's citation.

All of the information that is provided in the article is relevant and seems appropriate.

I found all of the references to be reputable sources.

Digital Media Literacy Assignment Notes
Proposed edit: Adding Sonora High School to the Education section of the Sonora, California article.

Sources:


 * 1) Sonora High's Website
 * 2) California Department of Education
 * 3) Sonora Elementary's Website

Proposed edit to article:

I would edit the sentence "Among the town's schools is Foothill Horizons Outdoor School." to "The town's schools include its namesake educational institutions, Sonora High School and Sonora Elementary School as well as the Foothill Horizons Outdoor School."