User:Sophialombardi/Yema Lucilda Hunter/Lexdem2 Peer Review

General info
Sophialombardi
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:Yema Lucilda Hunter
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Yema Lucilda Hunter

Evaluate the drafted changes
I like the change that you made so far in the category title. I think that this article is ultimately a good start to describing Hunter's life, but there is room to improve it. Firstly, I think that the lead could include more detail about who Hunter was. I think that the organization could benefit from some more sections, other than just life and work. While these sections are both important, I think that the life section could be more divided into specific sections, dedicated to her early life, education, etc. I think that everything that is written is written well, but the whole article could use some more detail. There does not seem to be a lot about the content and inspiration of her work, which would be a nice addition. Overall, I think it is a great start to the article.