User:Sophiaschortmann/Snailfish/JoeLoc Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Sophiaschortmann


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Snailfish&diff=1146935011&oldid=1146930955&diffmode=source
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Snailfish

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * Good job! The Lead includes a great introductory sentence that clearly describes the articles topic. It is concise and not overly detailed. There is no information in the Lead that is not explored later in the article.
 * The content added to this draft edit is relevant to the topic and up to date according to the sources used. The topics of olfactory receptors and pigmentation genes are explored in excellent detail for Snailfish. This particular edit does not deal with Wikipedia's equity gap.
 * The content added is entirely neutral and does not attempt to sway the reader in any manner. This edit adds very important information about the phylogeny of Snailfish that was missing on this organisms Wiki page.
 * In this edit, no photos were added to the page.
 * Overall, the additions made by user Sophiaschortmann seem to help the Snailfish's page enormously. Her work is clear and concise, easy to understand, and not biased at all.