User:Sophiatroia/Co-Cultural Theory/Dominic D928 Peer Review

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Sophiatroia/Co-Cultural Theory


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 * User:Sophiatroia/Co-Cultural Theory

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hi! The only thing I would say so far is that if some images or pictures were incorporated it may enhance the understanding of the reader. Also, in the Theoretical Framework section, if possible I would suggest adding more info for each co-cultural orientation. The overall balance of the article is great and the sourcing is really good too. The only thing I would say is to "beef up" some of the sections with defining the terms.