User:Sophiatroia/Co-Cultural Theory/Gaby340 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Sophiatroia


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Sophiatroia/Co-Cultural_Theory?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
The overall information and look of it is wonderful. The structure of the article is easy to follow and understandable. The leading sentence is perfect for a reader to understand exactly what they will be reading about. I can tell this group and person did proper research prior to starting this group project. Some terms are also adding to the structure with supporting the tone and balance of the overall goal. The content is neutral and informative which is important for a theory especially co-cultural. Certain key words like humanistic have linked photos which is also very interesting for a reader to dive deep into possible new vocabulary. Overall the information is well formatted and well phrased it allows the reader to grasp new information without confusing them on such theoretical topics. The information comes across neutral and interesting keeping me the reader intrigued to keep reading. Any other advice I would give would be to have a few more key terms that have photos attached and add some more information to the theoretical framework area just so it doesn't through off the consistent balance of the other areas (ex: key concepts have around 3 sentences then theoretical balance has 1 sentence it interrupts the flow.) Everything else is very well done!