User:Sophiatroia/Co-Cultural Theory/Jennamaroney24 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Sophiatroia


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Sophiatroia/Co-Cultural_Theory?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
When reviewing this article I think the layout of the article is set up well and logical. I liked the theoretical framework aspect at the bottom and this showing how this theory came to be and the different parts and aspects that make it up. I also think numbering the different levels in each category is very helpful and can make it clearer to read each one. I think there should be a little more of a description on each level in the categories just to make sure the meaning is understood instead of just reading what they are and not fully understanding. A very good start to the article.