User:Sophiatroia/Co-Cultural Theory/ManuelValeroUCF Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Sophiatroia


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Sophiatroia/Co-Cultural_Theory?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
The introduction to the page give a well description of the theory going into detail on who are affected by it. It emphasizes the power indifferences that certain communities face in all aspects. With the history section what the theory is based upon is good but adding actual origin of the theory and "creators" of it would give a common history section on other wiki pages. The key concepts and theoretical framework sections are just based concepts in the theory but a hyperlink explain each one would greatly enhance the page. The 4 references seem to be functional and reliable and the overall tone of the page comes off as neutral as it is stating information and not having opiniated words.