User:Sophiatroia/Co-Cultural Theory/Martiniaudrey Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Sophiatroia


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Sophiatroia/Co-Cultural_Theory?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * N/A

Evaluate the drafted changes
So far everything added the the draft is relevant to Co-Cocultural Theory. The definition is in depth and easy to interpret, and the following points about how many people that the theory talks about are otherwise misrepresented. That sentence is a good indication that this article aims to represent a variety of groups of people, and not just groups that are prominent in western culture. The listed source is from the class textbook, so as of now the citations are from trusted sources. This is a good start to the article!