User:Sophiazahra/Kaska Nation/Lannp24 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username) Sophiazahra


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Sophiazahra/Kaska_Nation/Lannp24_Peer_Review?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_peer_review
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Hi,

Since this is still a draft, don't forget to add a lead section, which is the introduction of Kaska nation. For mine, I put some sentences about its past, how the people came up with the name of their nation, and a few about its presence, then current number of registered members of that nation.

For geography part, if you can find some information about its previous location, in case they had been moving multiple times in the past, that would be great to have. But I think as of now, it looks pretty solid to me.

The history section can be expanded a bit more. I found a reference for this, hope this helps https://www.thecanadianencyclopedia.ca/en/article/kaska

It's just my suggestion, if you're able to find some information related to Kaska's demographic, you could include those in your draft. What types of housing they were living in? or types of clan system, economic and education system they used?

Since there are a few treaties associated with the nation, you can briefly summary those treaties, and how those have an effect on their life.

If the language they use has some history associated with, you can also talk about that.

In general, your culture sections are very solid, and I think you can focus more on other parts and don't forget to include pictures.