User:Sophie0100/Canvassing/Jordin Letchinger Peer Review

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Ellagracerobertson, Scienceman1936, Sophie0100
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Peer review for the group on Canvasing

Lead:


 * 1) The lead has been updated to reflect the new content added about canvassing, including its definitions, purposes, and historical context. This could be improved by summarizing some of the key points from the other sections for a bit more of a clear overview of the article's contents.
 * 2) It briefly mentions the practice of canvassing in political campaigns, its historical origins, and its effectiveness. Mentioning other major sections of the article could be helpful here, such as the sections on Practice, History, and Effectiveness.
 * 3) This is nice and concise, with essential information about canvassing without becoming overly detailed.

Content:


 * 1) The content added here is highly relevant to the topic of canvassing, by covering its definition, purposes, practices, historical evolution, and effectiveness. There are some places where the relevance could be improved by providing more specific examples or links to other case studies.
 * 2) The content looks to be up-to-date, covering historical developments as well as recent trends and studies on canvassing, particularly in the context of modern political campaigns.
 * 3) There doesn't seem to be any missing content to my knowledge, since the article covers a wide range of aspects related to canvassing.
 * 4) The article does not directly address equity gaps or topics related to historically underrepresented populations. Maybe think about adding information about how canvassing efforts have evolved to engage diverse communities.

Tone and Balance:


 * 1) The content added maintains a neutral tone, with objective information without bias or advocacy. It provides a balanced representation of different historical perspectives on canvassing, including its evolution, controversies, and effectiveness. Make sure that diverse viewpoints are adequately represented, especially in discussions about the impact of canvassing on voter behavior and electoral outcomes.
 * 2) This doesn't seem to be very persuasive toward any particular position.

Sources and References:


 * 1) The information is backed up by reliable sources, and accurately reflects the information provided in the cited sources, demonstrating a thorough understanding of the topic.
 * 2) The sources cited reflect a good thoughtful review of the available sources out there on canvassing, including historical texts, academic studies, and legal documents.
 * 3) While the article covers historical developments, make sure that recent studies and trends in canvassing are also represented to provide a balanced perspective on the topic.
 * 4) The links provided in the article appear to be correctly entered.

Organization:


 * 1) The information added to this article is well-written, clear, concise, and easy to read. It looks to be free of grammatical or spelling errors. It is also well-organized.

Overall Impressions:

The content added improves the overall quality of the article on canvassing, by adding additional information about its definition, practices, historical evolution, and effectiveness.

It includes relevant, accurate information, and covers a variety of aspects related to canvassing. To further enhance the article, potentially providing more specific examples, case studies, or real-world applications of canvassing techniques could be useful.

I really enjoy the detailed breakdown of this article. I will use this to look at deficiencies in it. In particular, looking at non-US sources.