User:Sophie Bazan/Lake Geneva/Wiki limno Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Sophie Bazan


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Sophie Bazan/Lake Geneva


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Evaluate the drafted changes
Hi Sophie, Lizzy here. You met the target word and reference requirements for the drafts- good job. Here are my more specific comments:

Introduction paragraph has some minor gramatical errors- give it another read through before the final draft.

Body "Limnological" paragraphs- I like how you have it organized so far I think if you either elaborate on the studies you have chosen or continue adding studies in this manner you will have a good final product. Things to remember- you need to cite anything that isn't common knowledge. For example, both your second and third paragraph only have 1 reference. You can cite this reference multiple times throughout the paragraph though if that's where you got all the information. Another thing that would be useful in your article is to make use of linking to other Wikipedia pages (use Ctr.+K or the link button at the top). For example, if you are talking about Pollution you can link to specific pages.