User:Sophiegeary/Choose an Article

Article Selection
Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.

how to critique:


 * Is the article's content relevant to the topic?
 * Is it written neutrally?
 * Does each claim have a citation?
 * Are the citations reliable?
 * Does the article tackle one of Wikipedia's equity gaps (coverage of historically underrepresented or misrepresented populations or subjects)?
 * Check out the article's Talk page to see what other Wikipedians are already contributing. Consider posting some of your ideas to the article's Talk page, too.

Option 1

 * Article title
 * Taylor Jenkins Reid
 * Article Evaluation
 * Content -
 * Missing a biography (such as early life and education sections)
 * Add section - Styles, Themes, and Influences (regarding her novel's subjects and inspirations)
 * Career section - discuss novel adaptations into films, clean up content in career section (awards into awards category)
 * Neutral - The article is definitely written neutrally and presents all the facts without bias. :
 * Citations - The claims have reliable citations.
 * Equity - Highlight female authors
 * Talk page - Not much besides discourse on her birthday


 * Sources
 * https://www.prhspeakers.com/speaker/taylor-jenkins-reid
 * writting process: https://www.theretaility.com/home/taylor-jenkins-reid
 * film adaptations
 * one true love- https://www.nytimes.com/2023/04/13/movies/one-true-loves-movie-review.html
 * daisy jones - https://people.com/tv/daisy-jones-and-the-six-all-the-changes-from-book-to-series/

Option 2

 * Article title:Mendenhall Glacier
 * Article Evaluation
 * Content
 * Some outdated information (glacier receded info from 2015)
 * Flooding section elaborated
 * good photos, maybe add some more recent
 * Neutral
 * Yes, fact based with no opinions:multiple perspectives (good and bad effects of receding glacier)
 * Citation
 * all quotations are cited
 * last paragraph of lead section isnt cited
 * slightly outdated (statistics)
 * Equity
 * acknowledges histories, folklore, alternate names of glacier with respect to original poeple who lives there
 * Talk page
 * length of retreat section discussed - some think its too long and pushed "global warming agenda"
 * C class, mid importance to WikiProjects 'Alaska' and 'glaciers'


 * Sources
 * https://orbiscascade-washington.primo.exlibrisgroup.com/permalink/01ALLIANCE_UW/db578v/cdi_unpaywall_primary_10_3189_172756507782202928
 * https://orbiscascade-washington.primo.exlibrisgroup.com/permalink/01ALLIANCE_UW/1juclfo/alma99162771825501452
 * https://www.fs.usda.gov/detail/tongass/about-forest/offices/?cid=stelprdb5400800
 * https://www.fs.usda.gov/detail/tongass/about-forest/offices/?cid=stelprdb5400800

Option 3

 * Article title:Seattle Aquarium
 * Article Evaluation
 * Content
 * Put official logo
 * Missing a mission page
 * Other pop culture appearances (animal crossing? Books - aquarium by David Van…:- Add section on research and conservation (With specific subgroups:- Add a section on educational efforts (school trips, kids oriented, etc.:- Add better photos (of individual exhibits?)
 * Add “Visiting” sections on visitation hours, prices , food, accessibility, membership, etc.
 * presentations and activities
 * exhibition section
 * animal wellbeing, live cams
 * educational programs - school programs and data
 * Neutral
 * Discussion on Talk page about an editor that made it more neutral and less advertisement-y
 * Citation - well cited
 * Equity - not relevant
 * Talk page
 * Add a section on research?
 * aquariums programs throughout year regarding conservation efforts
 * Exhibits section outdated - maybe check that with the seattle aquarium official page


 * Sources
 * https://www.seattleaquarium.org/
 * https://www.seattleaquarium.org/animals/
 * expansion - https://orbiscascade-washington.primo.exlibrisgroup.com/permalink/01ALLIANCE_UW/db578v/cdi_proquest_wirefeeds_2703251413
 * pop culture
 * animal crossing https://www.aza.org/connect-stories/stories/seattle-aquarium-and-nintendo-team-up-to-bring-popular-video-game-to-life
 * soul of an octopus: https://myedmondsnews.com/2017/07/recommended-reads-sweet-book-intriguing-octopus/
 * Aquarium https://www.theguardian.com/books/2015/mar/05/aquarium-david-vann-review-family-drama-underwater-fairytale

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Option 5

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