User:Sophieschindler/Sports medicine/Hypemike23 Peer Review

General info

 * Sophieschindler
 * Link to draft you're reviewing: User:Sophieschindler/sandbox

Lead

 * The lead was perfect for something like this
 * It sort of presented the problem and how the topic correlates with the conflict

Content

 * Very interesting content was in this draft and it was relevant to the topic
 * The content is up-to-date
 * No content is missing

Sources and References

 * There were two sources
 * The links to all references work

Organization

 * The content is very well organized

Overall impressions

 * The article really benefited from these changes
 * More sources were provided for the article