User:SophisticatedStick/User:SophisticatedStick/sandbox/Acharymn Peer Review

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Article lead Section:
This article needs a strong lead. I recommend to create a paragraph that explains the history of early human instrument and put it as a lead.

Structure:
This article structure will look good after having a lead in the top, currently the article is jumping straight to countries instead of giving a background.

The article structure looks out of place: I recommend renaming Africa heading.

Neutral Content:
The article is neutral.

Reliable Sources:
Sources are very reliable and researched.

Some recommendations for this article is to add more citations, some paragraphs are lacking citations like Israel and Southern Africa Paragraph.