User:Sophlm/Adriana Yadira Gallego/Trinchicanwrit Peer Review

General info
Adriana Yadira Gallego
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:Adriana Yadira Gallego
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
- Make the lead section slightly longer

- Change the second half of the bibliography section to past tense. For example "After graduation and an apprenticeship at the Alternative Museum in New York, she move[d] to California where she complete[d] public art projects, bec[ame] an arts educator in state prisons, and beg[an] her career in arts administration at the Norton Simon Museum in Pasadena, California."

- Put the title of art pieces in quotes (ex. "Centaura")