User:Soullierek/Katherine Collins/Papaya99 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Soullierek


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Soullierek/Katherine_Collins?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Katherine Collins

Evaluate the drafted changes
Your draft and article are well organized and informative! You detail both Collins' personal life and her contribution to queer comics. The links throughout the article increase notability, particularly the one that references Disney comics, which is a very notable name to mention in the article. Your use of references is reliable and there seem to be a variety of both primary and secondary sources which you include. The section strictly about Neil the Horse is well placed and draws the emphasis on Collins; most notable contributions. The tone in the draft is somewhat neutral (the phrase "beloved" suggests some form of opinion), and also I would refrain from explaining Katherine's details of transition, particularly her birth name. Other than that, it's a great draft and article!