User:Soupthief

About me
I'm a full-time college student and am working on my gen ed courses while I decide what career path I want to follow. I also work part-time at a preschool as a teacher assistant to help fund my education. In my free time I enjoy playing video games with friends, reading, and crochet. I live at home with my family and two cats (who can't stand each other). Fun fact: there are several feral cats that live in Disneyland that help with pest control.

My Wikipedia interests
I plan on doing small, simple edits to fix issues such as grammar and spelling. I'd like to work on pages that pertain to my interests and passions, ranging from video game characters to older Hispanic artists that I listened to with my dad growing up.

Article Evaluation
I have a general interest in video games and have grown up both watching and playing through various titles. Mortal Kombat is a series that is both nostalgic and is still a part of my life today. While the gory games are a lot of fun, the series has produced some more outlandish products and projects. One of the strangest things to come from the series is the Mortal Kombat: Live Tour. I visited the Mortal Kombat: Live Tour article on Wikipedia, and found three aspects of it worth commenting on: the short and inaccurate citations, the lack of information on the event itself, and the few, but noticeable grammatical errors.

Information on the event
The article talks about who was a part of the production, how the effects were done, and when and where the show was performed. All of these details matter, but the article fails to talk about the actual contents of the show. The plot section of the article consists of two short sentences, both of which don't do a good job of explaining the plot of the show. The article mentions that there are three protagonists, but doesn't actually name them. There is little to be learned about the contents of the show from the article, which is something that could be fixed.

Grammatical errors
Throughout the article there are a few grammatical errors that can be easily noticed as you read the article. These errors don't make the article unreadable, they just make you pause for a second before continuing on. For example, when explaining how the voice acting and sound effects were done the article states "Lip synching were pre-recorded," which is incorrect. It's a small mistake that can be fixed by simply changing one word. There are a few small punctuation errors in the article as well. While there are a few mistakes throughout the page, they can be fixed easily.

Conclusion
Overall, this page is "okay". It has a lot of room for improvement, but is a good starting place if you want to learn about the Mortal Kombat: Live Tour. The article has some good information, it just needs more citations and references that are both accurate and relevant. Additionally, the page provides a lot of information on how the show was put together and who was involved in it, but fails to explain the plot of the show. In terms of grammar, the article has few mistakes that can be fixed quickly.

Mortal Kombat: Live Tour