User:Soupx2/African-American LGBT community/Kay1017 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Soupx2


 * Link to draft you're reviewing


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * African-American LGBT community

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hey Soupx2, great job on the stuff that you have added so far. The article that you have chose already has a lot of good information, but I think that you could add more throughout the whole article. I think that the information that you have added so far is just your bibliography and proposal. I can not see any information within the article draft. The references that you have added are great and notable. They will definitely help you expand upon your article. You could also expand on the section HIV/AIDS, because that section in the article is not very expanded upon. Other than that, I am kind of limited on other tips that I can give you within your draft.