User:Sourcertuner/Mariya Volkonskaya/Reidy3 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Sourcertuner


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Sourcertuner/Mariya_Volkonskaya?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Mariya Volkonskaya

Evaluate the drafted changes
This article, especially compared to its previous version, is incredible. The chronological organization of her life is well structured and easy to follow. So much more information has been added, and without getting into irrelevant detail. The delivery seemed extremely neutral to me, and the entirety of her life is covered in good depth. The images included add a lot of value while reading in order to match names to people and places. The sources used all seem to be of good quality. Overall, this is a really well written and researched article, and my only suggestion would be to review to fix for some spelling and grammatical errors, something that would be fixed regardless of my review. great job.