User:Southbaybaby/Interaction design/Designerforwikitimes Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Southbaybaby


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Southbaybaby/Interaction_design?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
'FEEDBACK FROM DESIGNERFORWIKITIMES: good job so far on your edits! you do a great job of not being biased and I can see that you included important sources as well.'