User:SoyMilkIsBestMilk/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
I am evaluating the article on Lactose intolerance.

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I have chosen this article, because I am lactose intolerant. It is an affliction, near and dear to me. About 68% of people in the world have some level of lactose malabsorption, which can lead to lactose intolerance. My preliminary impression, was that it was a good introduction to lactose intolerance, with a stronger focus on the more medical aspects of the trait which would more likely to be of interest to the common person. (Briefly explain why you chose it, why it matters, and what your preliminary impression of it was.)

Evaluate the article
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I think that the content is quite good on explaining what lactose intolerance is in a very understandable manor without the use a lot of technical jargon. Yes it focuses on the more medical aspect of the condition, but I think that is warranted as that is what it is most commonly associated it. It has a matter of fact tone, with no inflammatory language. I did not catch any grammatical or spelling errors in the work. It is organized in a natural progress, of what is it, symptoms, causes, and management. There is minimal images included, but what is included is relevant to the point at hand when added in. The sources as well seem reputable as many come from scientific journals.