User:SpaceAge1/My Giant Nerd Boyfriend/Beyzia Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

SpaceAge1


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:SpaceAge1/My_Giant_Nerd_Boyfriend?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * My Giant Nerd Boyfriend is an autobiographical comic by Malaysian artist Fishball, following Fishball and her tall, nerdy boyfriend referred to as Mickey. The comic has been the fourth-most popular work from the publisher Webtoon, with 158 million views in 2019, and was nominated for a Ringo Award for Best Humor Comic. The couple announced their engagement in 2021 both on Instagram and on Webtoon. Since then, the title at the start of the chapters includes "*now fiancè". My Giant Nerd Boyfriend is created by Fishball, who is from Malaysia and was 27 years old during 2017. The comic is published on Webtoon and began publication in March 2017. As of April 2023, it publishes three times a week and has over 800 strips. As of 2018, the comic was edited by Bekah Caden. The comic was adapted into a short animated series which was published on YouTube in July 2019. There are ten episodes, each four minutes or less.
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * My Giant Nerd Boyfriend
 * My Giant Nerd Boyfriend

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I think the opening paragraph could use more citations regarding where the information is sourced. It says "with 158 million views in 2019, and was nominated for a Ringo Award for Best Humor Comic" -is there a website from Ringo Award that we can site?

I'm thinking you can also maybe add some additional information on how it grew so quickly and why it became popular. Maybe even explore where the majority of the fanbase is located? I like how you added a name to the "giant, nerd boyfriend", maybe continue adding small details such as this to add more context for those who know nothing about it.

You also touch on how often it's published, maybe more information on the artist/writer and who's in charge it? Also I think you could touch on whether or not it's complete, or if there's a timeline for completion/start.

I think when you begin discussing how it was turned into a short animated series you can also talk more about which creators from Youtube picked it up, if it's finished, or more additional information about the series.

The premise section for this article seems a bit short too, I think you can definitely add some major events and more details of challenges and positive moments within this series.

Overall, I think the neutrality of your writing seems good, I think you should focus on adding more information as well as citations to the page to make it more comprehensive/