User:SpaceVarangian/Tyche/Greekazoid Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing
 * SpaceVarangian


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:SpaceVarangian/Tyche?preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Tyche

Evaluate the drafted changes
Good cited, relevant paragraph for "worship" section. Information rounds out this part of article.

Makes sense to change "Family" section to "Mythology" as there is family info in the "Personal Information" bar to the right side.

Perhaps "Greco-Roman Tychai" section could be arranged differently. A citation could be added to the last sentence about the Tyche of Antioch.

Good photo added to go with your contribution to the "Depictions" section. Maybe the caption could be re-worded.

Workable links in references. Information that needs citing is cited correctly.

Clear notes made to explain changes you will make and where you will put contributions. Easy to follow.

Maybe more can be tied into what Polybius said in the Lead to later in the article. Lead can be fleshed out.

Don't know if "Greek deities series" bar to the right in original article is relevant.

Neutral tone and balance throughout.

Overall, your contributions add to the original article in a well-rounded way. You cite sources with accuracy. Your ideas to change titles around and knowing in which sections you want to put your contributions are clear and well thought out. I think the Lead and Greco-Roman Tychai section could be worked a bit.