User:SpaceshipCat/Yuki-onna/Nulifeforme Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

SpaceshipCat


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Yuki-onna - Wikipedia


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
I was not able to find a bibliography or sandbox page. After reviewing the article, I can see some challenges in contributing to the content.

I see that it is only about one mythological figure with limited references. It seems more likely to find information on Yuki-onna in pop culture than from the suggested sources. On the talk page for my article there was actually a list of suggested literature that I found helpful. Maybe there is a resource like that available for you as well.

The sections "Stories", "Variations" and "Behavior" all seem to have the same general idea. I would suggest finding a way to clearly distinguish each header form one another.

I do like that there seems to be enough art for the page and that is a benefit for the article. One of the pieces of artwork has a link that doesn't connect to a publish page. Maybe you could replace it with something that you find from a credible source?

Since I wasn't able to find the bibliography and/or sandbox I don't have any comparison for the existing version and your goal.