User:Spaige1500/Radium Girls/Toner1111 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Spaige1500


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:

User:Spaige1500/Radium Girls


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):

Radium Girls

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

So far, it seems like you have a great start to your sandbox that still may need some work. To further improve the article, consider including specific sources or citations to support the information, linking the sources within the paragraph, and breaking down the content into distinct sections for better organization. Your current references seem fine but can be incorporated more or maybe replaced with some better works.