User:Spaintlia/Desmonema/Mglovins Peer Review

This article sandbox draft has set a good foundation for a successful wikipedia article. Although a general description, population distribution, and species are definitely headings you want to include in your article, one way to expand your article would be adding more categories such as ecology (age and life cycle), sting and toxicity, or anatomy (sensory organs). The sandbox article mentions that Desmonema is closely related to the genus Cyanea, but it won't hurt to restate what some of those shared characteristics are.

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