User:Sparklehorse23/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
(National Action Plan for Climate Change)

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose this article as it related to my research topic of linking Indian climate policy with Modi and BJP's political hegemony. When finished reading the article for the first time, I feel like the page is quite outdated and lack the description of recent development of the climate plan as well as the relevant political significance.

Evaluate the article
The leading section only provides a concise introduction on the initiating NAPCC program itself back in 2008, explaining the 8 major approaches of the plan. However, details on the scale of the program, political influence and public opinion, and recent developments are not provided. Additionally, the section did not include a reference to all its sections below. Therefore, I don't believe the leading section is sufficient at providing enough information on NAPCC and fails to present the Wikipedia page efficiently.

The tone of the article is quite neutral as it summarized the progress of the eight missions without any judgemental statements. Since there are no mentioning of public sentiments and provides a normative description of each mission, the article did a great job of presenting all the information objectively.

While the article contains a holistic review of eight major missions under NAPCC, the sections for drawbacks and status is quite brief and lacks concrete details on recent year progress. The page also lacked a discussion of the political influence on climate policy, although both the Singh and Modi administration has participated in the design and revisions of the plan. Therefore, using scholarly reviewed sources, I could improve the article by presenting more information on recent developments and the role of government at play in the introduction and promotion of the NAPCC.