User:Sparr3/sandbox

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Article evaluation
Parker's Back
 * The plot summary seems to be too long and contains many unnecessary details.


 * There are still some citations needed.


 * The page seems to throw in mentions of the biblical references in the story. Perhaps a separate section on biblical references in the story should be added to the page.

For copyedit assignment I changed an upper N in one of the quotations to a lower case n because it was in the middle of a sentence.