User:SpartyZag/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Peloton (company)

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose this article because I am new to the Peloton community as of 2020. When the COVID-19 pandemic hit and all gyms were closed, I resorted to at-home workouts via digital platforms like Peloton.

Evaluate the article
I chose this article because it is something I spend a lot of time doing and have quite a bit of knowledge on the topic. The article was rated as a Start-Class on quality and Low on importance, which makes it a great first article for me to evaluate. While this article has a good foundation, there are a lot of edits that could be made to improve the quality including:


 * References are made to 4 of the Peloton instructors, but not to all. This seems a bit biased to me as these 4 are not of any more importance/ fame than the rest of the instructors. Maybe include a section with Wiki links to all of the instructors currently employed with Peloton.
 * A section around the growth of the company due to the COVID-19 pandemic would be relevant & new information. There are a few sentences, but it may be useful to show the impacts with a separate section with more detail.
 * Include information about their apparel line and additional demand around the product line.
 * Needs more images. I noticed someone requested an image of the bike in the Talk page in October 2020.
 * Products section:
 * Bike
 * Include more explanation/ Wiki link for Apple GymKit
 * Include detailed specs on the new Bike+ to differentiate from original Bike
 * Treadmill
 * Content out of date: The new Treadmill has since been released in the UK, will be released to parts of the US/ Canada in early 2021, and in Germany later in 2021

Overall this article seems to be in the early stages of development and could use quite a bit of work.

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