User:Spearstrike/Skwelwil'em Squamish Estuary Wildlife Management Area/Ska378 Peer Review

General info
Spearstrike
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Spearstrike/Skwelwil'em Squamish Estuary Wildlife Management Area
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Skwelwil'em Squamish Estuary Wildlife Management Area

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead has not been updated to reflect the new content added by my pear. The lead does have a introductory sentence that concisely describes the topic of the Estuary. The lead does not include a brief description of the articles major sections. The lead does not include information that is not present in the article. The lead is quick and concise!

The content added is relevant to the topic of the estuary. The content added is up-to date, however some sources are old, for example one is from 2007. None of the content looks like it doesn't belong, it is all relevant to the topic. The content discuses the Squamish nations participation in management of the area. I think a good addition would be discussing examples in history of if the Squamish ever weren't allowed to make management decisions for the land.

The content is neutral, the content does not appear to be baised or attempt at influencing readers opinion. There are no view points that appear to be under-represented, or over-represented.

All the new content added is backed by a reliable secondary source. The content does accurately reflect what the cited sources say. The sources are thorough. The management plan source is from 2007, it would be important to indicate weather plans have changed or if it is still the current plan. The sources are written by first nations and government branches, so I think it is a diverse spectrum of information. The links work except for one PDF file.

Grammar is good. No spelling errors to be seen.Group did not add more images/media.

I think the structure is well done, I think the amount of information is limited.

From their article I learned there is a broad-spectrum of wildlife present at their location. I learned it is located where two different types of water meets.

Their article does include at least 5 of the given topics. However I think further information could be added to build on the topics.