User:Spectral099/Chromosome abnormality

Prep for Peer Review
1) Lead


 * lead could give more info on importance
 * gives overview of detecting, causes, & types
 * unsure if talking about karyotypes should be included or moved

2) Organization


 * organization might need work

3) Balance


 * lots of info about down syndrome, only a sentence about turner - should be balanced
 * unsure if DNA damage during spermatogensis section is needed/too long

4) Neutrality


 * seems pretty neutral

5) Sources

6) Overall

- update section on numerical abnormalities

- add section about chromosomal abnormalities in animals?

- balance info about sperm/eggs

- add pictures

- update lead