User:SpeedReader&GrammarEnthusiast/Nonverbal learning disorder/Sarahamc0714 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

SpeedReader&GrammarEnthusiast


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:SpeedReader&GrammarEnthusiast/Nonverbal Learning Disorder
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Nonverbal learning disorder

Evaluate the drafted changes
I like how you are critically thinking through editing this article. The article plans you have so far seem to be on the way to creating a more accurately and thoroughly developed article. I think that the language in describing this is definitely something that should be considered. I like the idea of changing it to "disability" rather than "disorder" as long as research supports this. I would, however, suggest mentioning that this disability could as be described as "non-verbal learning disorder" to avoid confusion. Regarding the layout of the original article, I would suggest editing it so that the flow makes more sense. I suggest that after the lead section, you consider starting with the "history" section. I would then consider organizing the sections in the following order: "signs and symptoms", "diagnosis", "potential treatments", and "outcomes". I think it is an important addition in truly captivating this disability to discuss prospective or general outcomes for individuals. Also, I agree with your notes that you should add a section discussing the timeline of the development for this disability. Additionally, I would consider adding the prevalence of it among the ages, genders, and cultures within that new section. Your cites so far appear to be secondary sources. In addition to changing the ones you mentioned in your outline, I would consider looking through the references to notice the ones that are rather old so that you can ensure the article contains the most up-to-date information. The information you have thus far sounds neutral and does not appear to be overly representing anything. Overall, I think you have a great outline ready to have success in completing your edits for this article.