User:Spencerqolney/Descender (Comic)/ShanelleSmith Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Spencerqolney


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Spencerqolney/sandbox


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * The page doesn't exist

Evaluate the drafted changes
The organization is great. It makes sense. The only odd thing is most articles have the Lead section above the contents section, so I think mirroring that format would be an improvement.

The Lead does a great job of summarizing the important parts of the article. I do think it should be smaller than the Plot summary, especially since there are 32 issues of the comic.

A character section would be a nice addition and a theme section would also be an improvement.

I liked the amount of references added and a lot of the sites were related. The content is delivered in a neutral tone. The oldest source is from 2015, so all of the references are pretty current.

Overall, I just think it needs more sections and a larger plot summary.