User:Spenn7/Post-traumatic stress disorder among athletes/Madnel4 Peer Review

General info
(provide username) Spenn7
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Spenn7/Post-traumatic_stress_disorder_among_athletes?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template

Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
Post-traumatic stress disorder among athletes

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

The proposed addition that is currently in the sandbox makes sense for the lead section and for what is included in the article.

I do think the article might benefit from moving the History section after the lead section.

I also think the etiology section could benefit from further explanation of the types of injuries unique to athletes that are associated with PTSD and the prevalence of that.

The diagnosis section could include a mention of Acute Stress Disorder as an alternative

Treatment section could be organized into subsections with more details on each.

One potential addition is a new section adding famous or well known athletes who were diagnosed with PTSD.