User:Spenn7/Post-traumatic stress disorder among athletes/Sdmlas Peer Review

General info
spenn7
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Spenn7/Post-traumatic_stress_disorder_among_athletes?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Post-traumatic stress disorder among athletes

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

There has been a sentence added to the lead of the article. There has not been other proposed edits to the article. The citation included was primary so I would just suggest finding a secondary for the rest of the article reviews. The last sentence of the lead section mentions a random injury that is not mentioned again so I would suggest either adding more about it or taking this out completely. I would suggest rearranging the sections of the article with the history being put after the lead section. The history of the disease being discussed should come before etiology, examples, diagnoses, and treatment.