User:Sphdvn/Choose an Article

Article Selection
Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.

Option 1

 * Pilates
 * Article Evaluation
 * As this article is identified as Start-class, there is a lot of room for improvement. I was honestly surprised on how little information there is on the Wikipedia page as pilates is a pretty popular exercise. It contains the mere basic information but I think there could be more information added. I was thinking of adding more information in the "Comparison with yoga" section because I think that is the part most people would get confused by. As well as possibly adding a new image (as mentioned in the Talk section) that has better quality.
 * As this article is identified as Start-class, there is a lot of room for improvement. I was honestly surprised on how little information there is on the Wikipedia page as pilates is a pretty popular exercise. It contains the mere basic information but I think there could be more information added. I was thinking of adding more information in the "Comparison with yoga" section because I think that is the part most people would get confused by. As well as possibly adding a new image (as mentioned in the Talk section) that has better quality.


 * Sources
 * http://www.energypilatesfitness.com/pilates-vs-yoga.html
 * https://www.gaiam.com/blogs/discover/yoga-vs-pilates
 * https://www.harpersbazaar.com/uk/beauty/fitness-wellbeing/a25626354/yoga-vs-pilates/
 * https://www.theguardian.com/lifeandstyle/2018/dec/02/yoga-v-pilates-both-are-popular-but-which-would-work-best-for-you
 * https://www.healthline.com/health/fitness-exercise/pilates-vs-yoga#5

Option 2

 * Media Consumption
 * Article Evaluation
 * As this is a relevant topic in these times, I didn't think this article would be classified as a Stub-class article. Which is why there is good opportunity in updating some of the data as well as adding more information. I was planning on contributing information with the Social Media section as only discusses the its effect on self-esteem. There could be additional statistics regarding the actual consumption of specific social media websites which could help support the section because I believe this is a huge part of media consumption.
 * As this is a relevant topic in these times, I didn't think this article would be classified as a Stub-class article. Which is why there is good opportunity in updating some of the data as well as adding more information. I was planning on contributing information with the Social Media section as only discusses the its effect on self-esteem. There could be additional statistics regarding the actual consumption of specific social media websites which could help support the section because I believe this is a huge part of media consumption.


 * Sources
 * http://www.center4research.org/social-media-affects-mental-health/
 * https://www.pewresearch.org/fact-tank/2019/04/10/share-of-u-s-adults-using-social-media-including-facebook-is-mostly-unchanged-since-2018/

Option 3

 * Salcedo Park
 * Article Evaluation
 * There was one specific piece of misinformation that struck out to me. It was when the Salcedo Weekend Market was formed. It stated it was formed in 2004, but it was actually formed in 2005. So I want to correct that misinformation.
 * There was one specific piece of misinformation that struck out to me. It was when the Salcedo Weekend Market was formed. It stated it was formed in 2004, but it was actually formed in 2005. So I want to correct that misinformation.


 * Sources
 * http://salcedomarket.org/who-we-are/

Option 4

 * School of the Holy Spirit
 * Article Evaluation
 * According to the Talk page, there are some details that I do suggest editing. First, it would be the website as it doesn't exist anymore. I would suggest replace it with their Facebook page as that is where they are currently most active. Second, I also saw a certain name on the notable alumnae's list (Janine Paraiso) that isn't supposed to be there. As there is no manner of proving if this person is a notable alumnae, I suggest removing it. Another suggestion would be adding the address of the school as well as adding a new photo that actually shows what the school looks like/ the school logo rather than the map image it currently has. There also seem to be some issues with some of the links cited for Lira Luis as they are either aren't valid or don't exist anymore. I suggest updating those as well.
 * According to the Talk page, there are some details that I do suggest editing. First, it would be the website as it doesn't exist anymore. I would suggest replace it with their Facebook page as that is where they are currently most active. Second, I also saw a certain name on the notable alumnae's list (Janine Paraiso) that isn't supposed to be there. As there is no manner of proving if this person is a notable alumnae, I suggest removing it. Another suggestion would be adding the address of the school as well as adding a new photo that actually shows what the school looks like/ the school logo rather than the map image it currently has. There also seem to be some issues with some of the links cited for Lira Luis as they are either aren't valid or don't exist anymore. I suggest updating those as well.


 * Sources
 * https://web.facebook.com/holyspiritqc/?_rdc=1&_rdr
 * https://thirdquartercomputerproject.weebly.com/

Option 5

 * Binondo
 * Article Evaluation
 * There have numerous changes to this place that are worthy of mentioning in this article. I especially want to suggest adding how it has become a food destination. There is also new museum called the "Chinatown Museum."
 * There have numerous changes to this place that are worthy of mentioning in this article. I especially want to suggest adding how it has become a food destination. There is also new museum called the "Chinatown Museum."


 * Sources
 * http://tulay.ph/2019/02/19/chinatown-revived-in-different-flavors/
 * https://news.abs-cbn.com/life/06/09/19/look-museum-in-binondo-designed-like-little-chinatown
 * https://nolisoli.ph/64310/isko-revival-of-escolta-manila-bay-intramuros-csanjose-20190701/