User:SpicyHamSamson/Morrie Turner/Jessicaisyijhen Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

SpicyHamSamson


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:SpicyHamSamson/Morrie_Turner?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Morrie Turner
 * Morrie Turner

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

You added a lot of additional information in the Biography paragraph, which is very good. I like how you said the process of how he became a painter and other sub-information like dates. You've done a great job with the Biography paragraph. Your next step could be to add more information to his Tributes. Good job!