User:Spicyjennd/Positive discipline/Ridakazmi2 Peer Review

This article does a good job informing one about Positive discipline. As a person who did not know this method of raising children existed, this article made it clear for me to learn more about the subject. I admired how the author included the history behind it and compared this type of disicpline to the typical way of how children are usually brought up, through physical or verbal abuse.

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