User:Spicymama01/Transgender health care/Catluver777 Peer Review

Hi! I believe you have made informative points to add to your article. I believe your largest paragraph could be slightly more organized so readers can follow more clearly. When you discuss the percentages of perpetrators that could be its own paragraph for organizational benefits. I think your last point made could be rewritten to be more understandable, as it is currently unclear.

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